Tip # 1: 动词优先（避免名词化）
We should take into consideration several factors.
He must make a decision about what to do.
They gave us information about the new research program.
We should take into consideration several factors. [7个字]
He must make a decision about what to do. [9个字]
They gave us information about the new research program. [9个字]
We should consider several factors. [5个字]
He must decide about what to do. [7个字]
They informed us about the new research program. [8个字]
× The analysis of how X-factor impacts B gene expression was conducted. [11个字]
√ We analyzed X-factor’s impact on B gene expression. [8个字]
如果你查找常见的动词名词化，可以发现一个模式。动词使用像是“make”和“take”，动名词（verb + ing），或名词由-tion，-sion，-ment，-ence，和-ance结尾的，很高机率都有一个相对应 动词， 所以当你在修改英文时，利用寻找功能找出这些结尾和动词后修正就行。
1，无意义动词 + 动词名词形:删除无意义的，将动词名词形转换为主要动词。
Joe will conduct research on the impact of the recent drought on local wildlife. → Joe will research the recent drought’s impact on local wildlife.
The board will make a decision next week about whether to accept you next week. → The board will decide next week whether to accept you.
The approval of the plan was given by the committee yesterday. → The committee approved the plan yesterday.
Their interpretation of the implementation of the institute’s program was insightful. → They insightfully interpreted how the institute implemented its program.
First was their introduction of their analysis of dreams by the trauma patients. → First, they introduced how they analyzed the trauma patients’ dreams.
4，当主词中的动词名词形与谓词的动词名词形时:将两个动词名词形转成动词，考量两者的关系并加上合理的连接词(because, when, if, although, even though, despite, etc.)。
Her understanding of the situation was evidenced by the quitting of her job. → She understood the situation … she quit her job → When she quit her job, she showed she understood the situation.
We made an agreement not to buy the house.
They reached the conclusion that we should run a new cohort study.
Our review of the test results will begin tomorrow.
The discovery of a new planet by the Frankfurt Observatory excited the scientific community.
The failure of the staff to organize the festival properly was a disappointment to us.
The undertaking of building the new company was complicated by their lack of experience.
We agreed to not buy the house.
They concluded that we should run a new cohort study.
Starting tomorrow, we will review the test results.
The Frankfurt Observatory discovered a new planet, which excited the scientific community.
When the staff failed to organize the festival properly, they disappointed us.
They lacked experience, which complicated how they built the new company.